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Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Thursday, April 6, 2017

More Source Gold For Myers' Return

Posted two years ago at science fiction. com











So true - there is plenty of room to explore as it concerns Michael- zombie was able to get into his child hood. I loved the casting of Malcom McDowell as Loomis - but both films were failures - - I guess we are just going to have to take what we can get.. I am writing a script that will get michael off the " I kill m,y relatoves" beat - which needs to get tossed out - it was one time thing for the original 1 + 2. He needs to encounter a nemesis.esis - and that is my plan.

Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Back to School - "Bar Fight Against Football Team" Watch Until Lou Says "Now ya do!"







"I mean the wars over.  Get new parts for ya head!"



- Rodney



Great line.



Enjoy

Coburn Takes Oscar at 99 Oscars. How Is It Possible That He Never Won Before?





His performance is one that puts writers to work - in hopes of getting a masterful actor like Coburn   aand Co. to work with.  It's a lesson in acting, realism, and what one should do.

Tuesday, April 4, 2017

The Future Of The Film Industry Is The Past, Apparently. Gajonka Film White Paper On The Crisis In Hollywood.


Before we begin, I will share with you two facts.  Saturn is eight times the size of Earth and Batman the movie is currently getting a re-treatment.

No, it is not 1989.  It's 2017. 


The Economist just published two articles in their most recent issue about how Amazon is, based upon the all-pro content, and, apparently, their belief, that it's the best investment in the world today.

Let's look at Amazon.  Past 3 years of core data (billions).

                        14        15         16
Cash                            14b    16b       19b

Debt                             8        8          7

"OTro LIAB"                    7       9      13

Total Assets:                     54      65       83

Total Liabilities                  44     51      64   

To me,  looks like liabilities are growing faster than assets!!!!!!!!!!!!



We begin with AMZN because Bezos is trying to single handedly turn the film and entertainment industry into a circus.

There is value in film projects that are carefully written, cast, and filmed.  There is no value in thinking that an okay idea will work if they throw enough money at it.  Look,  the projects of AMZN and NFLX are not even at the drawing board by the time they have all of the ad money lined up to fund it and post a profit.

These two shops don't care about quality!

Think about it this way,  we are facing one of the most critical moments in film.

I just hope my instinct is wrong.  I keep my good ideas on this site because I hope somebody at one of these music-maker shops finds it and steals it...at least we will have quality.    Nick Cage and Deniro , not leaving out the Brits Cumberbatch and Fassbender acting in four films a year is not quality, it is cheap excess, and piss poor judgment.  Do they think they are doing us a favor?  Here's a wakeup call, it is not challenging to play pretend. 

Whew!  Okay, so since we know the next Batman film should be called DeathStroke Rises or center on The Joker's transition plan. 

Here's the opening of my story about that:


      Perhaps one could point to The Joker’s 60th birthday party as the moment of shift.  Penguin, at 74, uses a cane in public but behind closed doors insiders say he relies on a cutting edge mobilized wheelchair to move.  

Even if the Sandman were to escape from prison at 43, his weaponized mist has already been antidote…solved.  Referred to as Sand Man Mist, its core ingredient mystery was cracked, making any variation of it a non-existent threat.  

In a similar vein, The Riddler, now 51, has been chipped, making his whereabouts public knowledge at Riddlercheck.com. 

Joker had been planning a big celebration for his 65th After all, he had reached the acceptable age of retirement.  He also allocated much of his time to working on a way to keep his empire.  His boys expressed little interest in following his old man.  His girls impacted Joker so much he became a different man.  Now, only a much diluted flow of anarchy runs through his veins and Joker knows it. The time has arrived to enact his transition plan.


I researched aboutt 12 new forces that would be good for the new wave of the next generation.  I mean, are we all so uncreative that we can't create new characters, just keep re-making the same sh*t/?
As a treat, I will give you 1- The Snail Fish Man.   His toxin surge will melt Spidermman in 33 seconds.


Now, let's move to Halloween, then GI JOE.  We will wrap with He-Man.  Check back for updates.

ADDEK  AKKAD's HALLOWEEN 2018

Michael Myers should be driving...he drove in the original.  

We should not start this new one in 18  after the second one.  Do you realize how boring a hospital is?  I swear, if I see a hospital in the 2018 Halloween, I m walking out... but only for a piss because Michael Myers is my favorite badass.


For this film we make him the anti-hero to start. 

A string of mayhem has been spreading into his neighborhood, and his neighborhood young ones are too afraid to  trick or treat.     We create a team of four alternate villains, and Michael Myers makes his return by cleaning up the neighborhood, or city if need be.

Myers can go to Australia, or to Europe, either works.  I would love to see the French deal with him.  Remember, the best thing about Halloween resurrection was that the resurrection took place within the last 3 seconds.
We Know Myers has a flipped right eye lid- use what we know.  I am actually the guy who brought the anger and sadness to Zombie after his first film because he did not include any trick or treaters, Halloween decorations... not even a freaken pumpkin!  Peter, the genius who runs slash film helped me deliver the change that we saw in his second attempt.  Zombie installed a Halloween party.

Anyway, don't forget....it is October....brown leaves cover our lands...it is a time to bring all private people to the public eye...for all must answer the ring....of the doorbell on Halloween.


GI/JOE/COBRA COMMANDER?CRIMSON TWINS
Spores caused CC to grow 18 eyes on his head.  He wears the hood to suppress the stares and the added color view.
Cobra will keep CC at the top.  His right hand will be Mindbender and Scrap Iron on the left.  Destro is his mastermind and General,  The Crimson Twins are his secret weapon, Zartan, Baroness, and The Dreadnochs are the weights that will cause  the GI project to fail.  No need to spend time with storm shadow vs. Snake Eyes, I am sure they are sick of always being expected to fight each other.   The sacrifices should be Firefly, Major Blood, and a Dreadock on the Cobra side.
On the Joe side, take your pic, Beechead, Dusty or Alpine, or just kill the black guy. lol
kidding.


He-man
Snake Mountain offers a refreshing medley of villains.  While I will always love Frank Langella for breathing life into Skeletor, we need to introduce Skeletor to the world.  Use Trap Jaw, Beast Man,  Cobra Khan and Webstor, but leave a few like Whiplash and Mer-man  for the third act.  Skeletor must win, in the end.  This will set the franchise on the right track.  Enough of this bull sh*t that the good guys always have to come back in the end and win.

Monday, April 3, 2017

THE BALL GAME, SCREENPLAY , OPENING NEW PAGES ADDeD...Daily.

THE BALL GAME
By B.W.



*** Sneak Preview*** With music excised***


















EXT.   FIELD #3 – LONG SHOT

A large crowd of people gather to watch a refreshing new game.  The home dugout is filled with young little leaguers wearing maroon jerseys.  The away dugout is empty and waiting to be filled by a blended group of 10-12 convicts from The Battery,  Buffalo New York’s department of corrections.


EXT.  FIELD #3 – SHORT POV FROM BEHIND HOME PLATE

Tambrandt slaps the microphone on his clipboard as he steps over in front of homeplate to address the massive audience of people who have vested interests in how these convicts will end their day if they can’t remain safe through six innings.


TAMBRANDT


Welcome, All.  Now for most of you this will be the first time you have seen your guy since trial.  They may attempt to appeal to your  kinder side here, given the payout they most likely will receive.  Please let the name tags dictate who gets to stand closest to the sliding gates.  Now, Please, again, we have fixed the trigger gates this season so please, when a prisoner makes an out, do not push the gates.  The locking mechanism will free and the gates will slide open for you.  If you still need approved tools we have tool tents on both sides behind the stands, the sitting area.  New this year is the baby lynx.  It is the weapon that Braveheart used to kill one of the selfish lords…a fine weapon.  It ‘s chain is two feet long and the spike ball is dangerous so do be careful when swinging.  Mind your neighbors, please.   We have had a good run of safety here we like to keep it that way.  If you do not have a vested interests in a convicts demise, please feel free to help out the families that are seeking justice today.  We will be raffling off 6 taser guns - one for each inning.  Please see the three raffle stations and ask Christie Anne if you'd like a hand.


Now, let’s bring out the manager of the Northstar Tigers, the #1 ranked little league team in upstate New York!


EXT.  PRISONER BUS – ARRIVING

Murray, the Warden’s appointed manager stands up and calls out the lineup as the convicts drink beer cans from the two large coolers positioned up front of the blue prison bus.



MURRAY


Okay, here’s the lineup.  Remember, you get a hit…all you need to do is make it to first.   If you try and stretch it out against these kids, you will get a chance to rest but don’t turn a single into an exit.  Those gates open, its only you and that bat you have.


CLARKE

“How far do the tasers fly this time?”


BECKER

“ Tasers go one distance, three feet.  You can use the bat to swipe it and they only sell five of them all game.  Maybe you will get lucky.”


MURRAY

One, Thompson

Two, Berman

Three, Steenbock


Four, Penner


Five, Brushy


Six, Mitchell


Seven,  Maguire


Eight,  Schwartz


Nine,  Goldman


Ten,  Kubricks


Eleven, Russo


Twelve,  Casey


Thirteen, McCann

and last, Clarke.


Good luck, now remember go straight to the dugout or the guards will zap you.

 EXT. LONG SHOT FROM HIGH CENTERFIELD.  MOVING TOWARD HOME PLATE AS THE JAIL BUS ARRIVES AND THE VISUAL OF THE HUGE CROWDS BECOME FRIGHTENING - DAY
The mob of crowd members converge on the bus as it pulls in behind the visitor's dug out, now empty but for one large keg of beer on ice.  The doors swing open and with the crowd wailing and cursing, there are a ew minutes that pass before anyone steps off.  Here, the players fixate their stares at the crowd, most noticing the sad and upset family members they saw in during trial now carrying metal bats, long-knives, machetes, and taser guns.
Russo is the first to move.
RUSSO
Wow, I never thought I would see them again.  Fuck it, I was an all star in little league.
GOLDMAN
Heh, I don't even see anyone related to my murder...this will be easy for me...see, it pays to be female in America boys
Goldman follows Russo off the bus, and the others...eventually follow. 
EXT.  Camera POV of players exiting the bus and getting spit on, drinks and food thrown in their face, enough for all convicts to run like little girls to the dugout.  All except Casey, Kubricks, Steenbock, Mitchell, and Penner.  They appeared cool and calm.  This would be their third time playing the Buffalo Angels in burgundy.
EXT. Long shot from behind the pitchers mound as the Angels have taken the field and are warming up.  Camera zooms into the convict dug-out , showing Maguire tapping the Keg and helps Berman and Brushy by filling their cups.
MAGUIRE
"ooh-ehh!  Looks like we got ourselves some Milwaukee's Beast!  Nothin but the best!"
Food and liquid continue to litter the convicts dugout until Tammbrandt's voice can be heard demanding the pelting to stop or to be escorted away from field 3 entirely.





TITLE:  ORIGINS


EXT.  Medium shot of the final stretch at Belmont.  The horses jump from the gate.



SIEGRIST and KUBRICKS HAVE TO STAND ON THE BENCHES.  ITS STAKES DAY-no room, poor visibility.

SIEGRIST
This is my last $500, Wade, what did you bet? Lemme see yer tickets.

KUBRICKS
I don’t know.  #6 Pancake Sandwich.

SIEGRIST

Ha!  99-1.

The crowd jumps and stirs as the horses race and close in on the final stretch.  Kubrick’s gun falls from his waist when he sees his #2 horse make a move.

KUBRICKS
Here we go, terminator blue, I got you!

Three older black men stand behind Kubricks and Siegrist.  They are too old to stand on the benches.  They complain about seeing the backs of people and no race. As the horses head home for the line, one of black guys gets irritated at the two idiots blocking their view.  He sees the gun drop.  He picks it up.

SIEGRIST

Come on Pantherfox you bastard run!

BLACK MAN 2

Go 4 ! go 4! Get up!

At the finish the 4 horse soars up from wide outside and beats terminator blue to take the million dollar prize.

BLACK MAN 2

I won! I won! Hey!

Kubrick is pissed, he throws his beers and spits on his ticket before ripping it to shreds.

KUBRICKS

I can’t see shit! Just saw a few manes! 
Kubricks notices his gun is missing and he looks back to the guy hollering about the horse that beat his.

SIEGRIST
Hey, good bet!  How much you have on him?

BLACK MAN #2
$2 across the board!!!! Wooo-hee

KUBRICKS sees his gun in Black man 3’s hand, holding it out to return it t him.  Kubricks thanks him, smiles, picks up the revolver and shoots black moon 2 in the back of the head as he waits in the crowd to go cash his chalk winning ticket.




TITLE:  FIRST INNING



EXT.  Close-up of the back of the first batter.  He is a huge, massive man....over300 pounds.  Name on the #14 jersey reads “THOMPSON”



The pitcher sends the first pitch down and Thompson swings and fouls it back.  The crowd has been drinking, too, and they make sure to let the folks with "Thompson" stickers gain prime pole position where the gates slide open.  The second pitch arrives and Thompson smacks a ball down the third base-line.  The third baseman fields it quick, then loses the ball on the transfer to throw.  Thompson, rther than running full blast, looks back and sees the bobble, and trips five feet from first.  3B picks up the ball and whipts it to first.  Thompson picks himself up and dives to first.  The ball is overthrown and Thompson is safe.



TITLE:   THOMPSON

EXT.  Long shot of a swimming pool hosting a swim meet.  The scoreboard reveals a tie meet;

Bay Hills 8
Bay Coast 8

 There’s one relay left.   

Dusk

A gun fires and the first of three swimmers vaults into the shiny, calm , dark blue pool water.

The crowd cheers and the loudest chant is first heard.

BAY COAST HECKLER PARENT A

“Don’t fuck this up Joey, you’re the fucking anchor!”

The heckler was screaming at his son, and Bay coast anchor freestyle, Joe Thompson, undefeated in five years.  This year he faces Lenny Gott, the kid who stole his girlfriend, took her to the prom, and took her virginity, then proposed marriage.

BAY HILLS HECKLER PARENT A

“  Let’s go Rick, we’re winning!”

Joey rips his headphones off and walks over to Lenny who is getting his shoulders massaged like fresh  meat  by his ex-girlfriend of only 6 months ago.

THOMPSON

“EAT SHIT LEN.  WATCH ME WIN NO matter how big the lead.”

LENNY

“Ahhh, thanks Stacy.  That feels better,” he and Stacey both ignore Thomson which infuriates him.


The second unit goes off and Bay Hills team has pulled off a four length lead.

Thompson just stares at Len and Stacey.  He wants them both dead.

BAY HILLS HECKLER PARENT B

“Oh, shit Joey!!  This is all up to you now!   We’re fucked!
The parent argue as Lenny steps up and dives in.  A full four seconds elapse until Joey launches out and immediately he picks up a length on Lenny.  He strokes hard and when they hit the wall Lenny is ahead by only one length.  Clearly, he is a shitty freestyle swimmer.


BAY COAST PARENT HECKLER B

“Oh, what a shit-show  Hess, your son cant swim for shit!  He’s blowing it!


Thompson takes over and proceeds to win by five lengths. 

As Stacy waits for Lenny to sulk in the pool  at his monumental failure,  Thompson walks over, holding a huge five foot long , glowing gold trophy, grabs Lenny by his hair, drags him out of the pool and into Stacey.  Thompson then attacks Lenny, picking him up, flipping him around and performing, of all moves, a real professionally set-up pile driver, impaling Len’’s skull into the wet cement.  Blood burst all over the rest of Len’s team.



ANNOUNCER



“… and his sixth consecutive win at Anchor!  Big Joe Thompson!”



EXT  Field #3 Crowd perspective looking from the stands as the next batter steps up.

#7 slowly steps to the plate. David Berman may be dressed in a baseball uniform, but he does not look like an athlete.

 

ANGRY CROWD HECKLER B

 

“ You murdered my daughter you worthless fuck.  Go ahead try to hit…try to get a-“

 

The pitch came in and the umpire called it as it was

 

UMPIRE

 

Striiiike 1

 

Tambrandt tapped his mike on his clipboard to indicate this could be the first victim.  He is so proud of his code activated, sliding security fence, he wants to make sure it fucking works given all the money it cost.   Tambrandt relaxed as he saw Ronnie Summers counting today’s gate.  $2,000 per person.

 

UMPIRE

 

Baaaall 1

 

The pitcher was young Mike Kotic, and he was not afraid of these guys.  He’s hit 25 convicts so far.  A hit by pitch is a safe trip to first base.

 

Mike hurled in his third pitch and this time Berman swung….he just got a piece of the ball with the tip of the bat, the ball rolled out three feet, Berman dropped his bat and booked it to first.  Andujar Rojas was at catcher and he was chubby and slow.  This was a piece of cake though.  He grabbed the ball and drilled a strike to Jimmy Sebbo at first.

 

TITLE:  WINTERS

 

EXT.  Longshot of a crowded stretch of ocean beach.   Gerry Winter’s wife, Bambi, is a beach bum and she forces him to go on weekends when the sands are packed and it just boils his blood.  After a few cold crisp beers he gets cozy and enjoys himself, though.  Gerry just finished suffering a 100 yard walk carrying an 80 pound Coleman capped with two bags of ice, plus an ice water thermos that weighs 30 pounds.  He is pissed and tired.  The beach is packed and to further irritate him Bambi packed a spot  about 8 feet from some jerk listening to his portable radio.  He is listening to the Yankee game. DAY

BAAMBI

Don’t be a dick, Gerry.  Put your 50 block on and have another beer.  They are cold.  I got your favorite, red dog…or wolf.

 

GERRY

 

Excuse me buddy, could you turn that down a little.  It’s too loud.

 

ANNOYING BEACH RADIO GUY

 

It’s almost over.  Maldonado’s coming in. Games tied!

 

Gerry played soccer, he has no idea what he just said.

 

FADE OUT

 

TITLE   ONE HOUR LATER

 

FADE IN

 

It’s an hour in and still, the radio is playing as the game has reached inning 15.  Gerry cracks beer8.  He’s loosening up and rubbing lotion bambis back.

 

Gerry

Hey pal, your annoying. Turn the game off. No one wins today.

ANNOYING BEACH RADIO GUY

Hey, I’m a cop.  Watch it.

 

Ext.  parking lot – almost sunset.

 

Gerry walks on the pavilion heading toward the car.  He had to listen to 10+ innings of a baseball and the game lasted longer than his beer supply.  He listened to the nobody beats the wiz commercial 20 times.  He is pisssed and h made sure that he and bambi left shortly after the cop who shit on his only day off all week.

 

Gerry

 

Hurry up, girl. Giddy.

 

Bambi

I have to hit the showers and wash off this sand.

 

Gerry

 

I’ll bring the car around

 

The lot was still filled with cars as most afternoon beach folk stay until sunset.  Gerry sense his chance to get this guy.

 

EXT  Zoom shot of the annoying radio guy loading his trunk, taking his time.

 

Gerry jumped in his car and swung it around fast and he was going to enforce his own law today= the law of peace and fucking quiet on the goddamn beach.

 

Gerry steppe on it and rather than throw an empty beer bottle at the guy’s head, the cop lost his balance toweling off his ankles.  He stepped into the path of Gerrys speeding car and Gerry just ht the gas.

Rather than call 911 and report the accident, Gerry noticed no one was in sight.  In a flash he did a lap and ran the prick over a send time just as he held up his hands , stunned reaching for help.  Gerry smiled and yelled at him as he passed.

 

Gerry

Hey!  You deserve it asshole!

 

To his shock Gerry was able to bring the car up to the pavillion, pick up his wife of 15 years, and drive away like a cop himself – keeping the ocean free from assholes with portable radios.

 

Six weeks passed.  Gerry never gave it another thought.

In the middle of week 8, almost two months after the accident, two plainclothes officers knocked down his front door.
 
“… and his sixth consecutive win at Anchor!  Big Joe Thompson!”